Howdy, fellow Draconiacs! RazorFox here.
And so the cleansing begins. Will any of Princess Lumina‘s memories of Kilani survive? Stay tuned…
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Not much else going on right now except feverish work on the 2013 Draconia Chronicles Calendar. I’d hoped to have the ordering information up this week, but I need just a tad longer to get it all together. I can tell you that the calendar will cost just US$17 for each one, and then a flat $5 to cover worldwide shipping and handling. The first wave of calendars will be shipped out in early December, well before the start of 2013. Keep your peepers peeled for ordering information, which will also be announced on my Twitter feed and on the Draconia Chronicles Facebook group.
Until then, it’s back to work on both the comic and the calendar. Let’s rock!
Take care, my fellow Draconiacs, and thanks for reading!
=RazorFox.
418 Comments
i understand the draconians hatred of the tigress tribes, but must that lead to a complete purge of any good memories of them. it just seems fearmonging and wrong. also, first
Sympathy can be seen as a weakness.
some people may see it that way, but in truth, strength doesn’t come from merciless, ruthless feelings. but it’s your comic, write it the way you want to.
i understand the draconians hatred of the tigress tribes, but must that lead to a complete purge of any good memories of them. it just seems fearmonging and wrong. also, first
Sympathy can be seen as a weakness.
some people may see it that way, but in truth, strength doesn’t come from merciless, ruthless feelings. but it’s your comic, write it the way you want to.
Oh man, I thought she wanted to keep other important stuff besides that
Can’t have her leaving little messes all over the palace.
Oh man, I thought she wanted to keep other important stuff besides that
Can’t have her leaving little messes all over the palace.
Oh man, I thought she wanted to keep other important stuff besides that
Can’t have her leaving little messes all over the palace.
“I’ve had ample practice over the years”. Could that include Queen Oscura hgerself!? Dun, dun, DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
Hmmm… Intriguing observation…
What can I say? She said it herself. Ample YEARS of it. And she works for the palace… so who would her clients be besides the royal family? A couple of guards?
Wiping memories of Kilani, check. Keeping all of the fond memories that the two of them have shared together intact, check. Making sure that she remembers her toilet training, Priceless.
I’m sure glad that she’s got her priorities straightened out.
Can’t have a six-year-old running around in a diaper. She is a princess, after all. ^__^
True. And at the very least they can have an excuse as to why her memory isn’t all that much in tact by explaining that she must have hit her head during that whole volcano incident.
The big question is however…is the queen going to return Velvet Sun and make her daughter forget that she ever lost it?
I dunno. That’s bordering on “miracle” territory, now. ^o^
I understand the importance of having a six-year old princess toilet trained, but I would be more worried about the lessons that she’s learned. I honestly wouldn’t want to re-teach six years of ANYTHING.
Agreed. Hence, the more selectively targeted cleansing this time around. Toilet training is just the tip of the iceberg.
Sorry. Six MONTHS.
Hah, the Queen cracked a funny!
I’m quite interested in how this mind wipe will work. Also does this sort of thing increase in difficulty in older dragons? Either or, I can’t possibly see how this can go wrong.
(Botch it, botch it, c’mon man, botch it. Not hatin’, just think it would benefit the future generations is all. Even if by a little, please botch it!)
Doctor Lucis says she’s good at what she does. But then again, even the best sports team lose a game every now and then. We’ll see how it turns out.
I don’t think you should wish that, why? Read my side effects comment! ||
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I apologize, but my inner grammar Nazi compels me to point this out.
On panel 4, “intact” is supposed to be one word. Not “in tact.”
Intact – Not altered, broken, or impaired; remaining uninjured, sound, or whole; untouched; unblemished.
Tact – A keen sense of what to say or do to avoid giving offense; skill in dealing with difficult or delicate situations.
Turns out you’re right. Thanks for pointing this out.
I’d honestly thought it was “in tact” [sic], and that “intact” was an incorrect compounding of the two words. The corresponding example of this is with the term “set up.” “Set up,” as two words, is a verb. “Setup,” as one word, is a noun. Despite this, most people just use “setup” for all instances of the term. I thought maybe the same bastardized compounding of “in tact” had occurred, but then I looked it up and realized that it’s always been “intact.” Huh. Learn something everyday. I love my readers! ^__^
Suffice to say, I’ve just corrected that word balloon and reuploaded the file. Thank you, mein grammarführer! ^__^
“Springtime for Hitler, and Germaneeee! Deutschland, is having, a baaaaallllllllllllll!”
they better see how nice Kilani was
They might, one day. Wishful thinking, I know.
UN-fortunately, THAT could turn Oscura into an emo full of guilt, regret, and suicidal tendancies. 🙁
Reply please! ^
What… do I reply to? There’s no question.
The one saying UN-fortunately, THAT could turn Oscura into etc. etc. etc. RazorFox. I tried to make an arrow pointing to the comment, but I couldn’t do it. Hope this helps! 😉
Also Razor, I added a possible side effects comment that you REALLLY should read and reply! Please?
Yeesh, hold your horses. I have a life here, and it’s Thanksgiving, to boot. Plus, responding in any detail to that comment would create the possibility of a spoiler… or WOULD it?
But otherwise, while I do try to reply to each comment at least once, I don’t always respond to every subsequent comment in that particular thread. I figure that I’ve said my piece and if I feel a need to add anything else, I will. Anything else that amounts to the speculation you’ve posted will be addressed in the natural unfolding of events within the comic. You’re welcome to try to predict the future all you want, or ask hypothetical, rhetorical “what if” questions, but in the name of protecting future story developments, I reserve my right to remain silent.
Happy Thanksgiving, though! ^__^
Oh, sorry, I understand but you should at least please try to read my comments on this page, they’re pretty observant and imaginative! (why is that line “or WOULD it?” proving to be a real tingler?)
Oh, and Happy Thanksgiving to you too Razor!
I’ve read every single one, from you and everyone else. You’re not the only Draconiac here, but I certainly appreciate your enthusiasm. ^__^
Thanks! ^u^
“I’ve had ample practice over the years”. Could that include Queen Oscura hgerself!? Dun, dun, DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
Hmmm… Intriguing observation…
What can I say? She said it herself. Ample YEARS of it. And she works for the palace… so who would her clients be besides the royal family? A couple of guards?
“I’ve had ample practice over the years”. Could that include Queen Oscura hgerself!? Dun, dun, DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
Hmmm… Intriguing observation…
What can I say? She said it herself. Ample YEARS of it. And she works for the palace… so who would her clients be besides the royal family? A couple of guards?
Question! Are the dragon statues in the first panel each holding an element? It looks like the two we can see are fire and light. On a separate note, new character! Chief-physician-light-dragon-lady-who-will-probably-have-a-name-soon!
Her name is actually mentioned right there in the word balloons.. Doctor Lucis.
And that is how I learned to read more slowly. Chew your thoughts before you swallow!
It’s okay. I actually try to do as much name-dropping as I can get away with amidst the characters’ dialogue. Whenever there’s a chance to add a character’s name to the dialogue and it would sound natural, I add it. Anything to help people remember character names. ^__^
Otherwise you may choke on them or barf ém back out! 😀
Question! Are the dragon statues in the first panel each holding an element? It looks like the two we can see are fire and light. On a separate note, new character! Chief-physician-light-dragon-lady-who-will-probably-have-a-name-soon!
Her name is actually mentioned right there in the word balloons.. Doctor Lucis.
Poor Lumunia. I know it won’t hurt at least I hope it won’t. Also if she gone through this before won’t doing it over, and over again cause some side effect? Oh, and one more question if she has bonded with Kilani enough that she instinctively shes her a mother figure or remembers her won’t the memory wipe harm her?
All good questions, all of which will be answered on future pages. Sorry, I can’t say anymore on that. ^__^;;
It’s cool.
I think Lumina’s side effects of her second mind wipe are 1) Lumina’s body turns a foul shade of black, her underbelly and irises turn blood-red, her wings turn a death-like shade of gray, and her horns turn grayish-black and curve towards each other. 2) Her hair sticks straight up like a super saiyan, only her hair is still brown. 3) The process unlocks all of Lumina’s powers, but also unhinges her mind. 4) Lumina escapes from Lucis’ room but not before tormenting and attacking Oscura to the point where she becomes a paraplegic.
5) Using her powers, Lumina constructs an upgraded version of Circuitae’s weapon and attaches it to her left arm, she then acquires a tapestry with the light dragon insignia on it, dyes it red, and wears it like a cape.
With conflicting memories, a corrupted soul, dangerous powers, an unstable mind, and a broken heart, “Dark Lumina” will set out to “save Draconia” from ruin.
A very fitting theme for Dark Lumina would be :My Innermost Apocolypse: from The Binding of Issac.
I bet that could happen, but I hope it doesn’t.
Oh wow those are some pretty detailed guesses.
Yeah-oh! Can you signal RazorFox to reply to my comment about the side effects please?
Sorry I can’t he has to do it himself or see it pop up his account or something. He might get hundreds of notifications a day so he might not see it.
Oh, ok. But it’s a pretty good guess, right?
The transformations sound a little extreme, but overall they’re pretty good guess.
Hey Razor, I’ve came up with a guess of what might happen to Lumina during the mind erasure process. Please reply after reading it. 😉
And that is how I learned to read more slowly. Chew your thoughts before you swallow!
It’s okay. I actually try to do as much name-dropping as I can get away with amidst the characters’ dialogue. Whenever there’s a chance to add a character’s name to the dialogue and it would sound natural, I add it. Anything to help people remember character names. ^__^
Otherwise you may choke on them or barf ém back out! 😀
Question! Are the dragon statues in the first panel each holding an element? It looks like the two we can see are fire and light. On a separate note, new character! Chief-physician-light-dragon-lady-who-will-probably-have-a-name-soon!
Her name is actually mentioned right there in the word balloons.. Doctor Lucis.
And that is how I learned to read more slowly. Chew your thoughts before you swallow!
It’s okay. I actually try to do as much name-dropping as I can get away with amidst the characters’ dialogue. Whenever there’s a chance to add a character’s name to the dialogue and it would sound natural, I add it. Anything to help people remember character names. ^__^
Otherwise you may choke on them or barf ém back out! 😀
Poor Lumunia. I know it won’t hurt at least I hope it won’t. Also if she gone through this before won’t doing it over, and over again cause some side effect?
All good questions, all of which will be answered on future pages. Sorry, I can’t say anymore on that. ^__^;;
It’s cool.
I think Lumina’s side effects of her second mind wipe are 1) Lumina’s body turns a foul shade of black, her underbelly and irises turn blood-red, her wings turn a death-like shade of gray, and her horns turn grayish-black and curve towards each other. 2) Her hair sticks straight up like a super saiyan, only her hair is still brown. 3) The process unlocks all of Lumina’s powers, but also unhinges her mind. 4) Lumina escapes from Lucis’ room but not before tormenting and attacking Oscura to the point where she becomes a paraplegic.
5) Using her powers, Lumina constructs an upgraded version of Circuitae’s weapon and attaches it to her left arm, she then acquires a tapestry with the light dragon insignia on it, dyes it red, and wears it like a cape.
With conflicting memories, a corrupted soul, dangerous powers, an unstable mind, and a broken heart, “Dark Lumina” will set out to “save Draconia” from ruin.
A very fitting theme for Dark Lumina would be :My Innermost Apocolypse: from The Binding of Issac.
I bet that could happen, but I hope it doesn’t.
Oh wow those are some pretty detailed guesses.
Yeah-oh! Can you signal RazorFox to reply to my comment about the side effects please?
Sorry I can’t he has to do it himself or see it pop up his account or something. He might get hundreds of notifications a day so he might not see it.
Oh, ok. But it’s a pretty good guess, right?
The transformations sound a little extreme, but overall they’re pretty good guess.
exactly how comman is the practice of removing memories anyway? and why does Dr. lucis have years of practice for it? has this sorta thing been done before? you have a right to be cautionary queeny.
Behold the power of a good résumé. ^__^
Hey Razor, I’ve came up with a guess of what might happen to Lumina during the mind erasure process. Please reply after reading it. 😉
Poor Lumunia. I know it won’t hurt at least I hope it won’t. Also if she gone through this before won’t doing it over, and over again cause some side effect? Oh, and one more question if she has bonded with Kilani enough that she instinctively shes her a mother figure or remembers her won’t the memory wipe harm her?
All good questions, all of which will be answered on future pages. Sorry, I can’t say anymore on that. ^__^;;
It’s cool.
I think Lumina’s side effects of her second mind wipe are 1) Lumina’s body turns a foul shade of black, her underbelly and irises turn blood-red, her wings turn a death-like shade of gray, and her horns turn grayish-black and curve towards each other. 2) Her hair sticks straight up like a super saiyan, only her hair is still brown. 3) The process unlocks all of Lumina’s powers, but also unhinges her mind. 4) Lumina escapes from Lucis’ room but not before tormenting and attacking Oscura to the point where she becomes a paraplegic.
5) Using her powers, Lumina constructs an upgraded version of Circuitae’s weapon and attaches it to her left arm, she then acquires a tapestry with the light dragon insignia on it, dyes it red, and wears it like a cape.
With conflicting memories, a corrupted soul, dangerous powers, an unstable mind, and a broken heart, “Dark Lumina” will set out to “save Draconia” from ruin.
A very fitting theme for Dark Lumina would be :My Innermost Apocolypse: from The Binding of Issac.
I bet that could happen, but I hope it doesn’t.
Oh wow those are some pretty detailed guesses.
Yeah-oh! Can you signal RazorFox to reply to my comment about the side effects please?
Sorry I can’t he has to do it himself or see it pop up his account or something. He might get hundreds of notifications a day so he might not see it.
Oh, ok. But it’s a pretty good guess, right?
The transformations sound a little extreme, but overall they’re pretty good guess.
Hey Razor, I’ve came up with a guess of what might happen to Lumina during the mind erasure process. Please reply after reading it. 😉
Priorities, Queen Oscura has them straight.
For the palace has a lot of expensive rugs. ^__^
Priorities, Queen Oscura has them straight.
For the palace has a lot of expensive rugs. ^__^
exactly how comman is the practice of removing memories anyway? and why does Dr. lucis have years of practice for it? has this sorta thing been done before? you have a right to be cautionary queeny.
Behold the power of a good résumé. ^__^
Priorities, Queen Oscura has them straight.
For the palace has a lot of expensive rugs. ^__^
exactly how comman is the practice of removing memories anyway? and why does Dr. lucis have years of practice for it? has this sorta thing been done before? you have a right to be cautionary queeny.
Behold the power of a good résumé. ^__^
Ok, Danny, if you were trying to lift the tension and the sorrow… I hate to say it but you failed miserably. That was not funny, especially in a situation this serious when its done to a character this young.
She just wants to make sure an important skill is left alone, is all.
I agree with Alex, that was a stinker… D’OH!
Ok, Danny, if you were trying to lift the tension and the sorrow… I hate to say it but you failed miserably. That was not funny, especially in a situation this serious when its done to a character this young.
She just wants to make sure an important skill is left alone, is all.
I agree with Alex, that was a stinker… D’OH!
Ok, Danny, if you were trying to lift the tension and the sorrow… I hate to say it but you failed miserably. That was not funny, especially in a situation this serious when its done to a character this young.
She just wants to make sure an important skill is left alone, is all.
I agree with Alex, that was a stinker… D’OH!
Doctor Lucis looks awesome!!!
Thanks! Part of her design was arrived at by way of suggestions from my LiveStream audience. ^__^
Doctor Lucis looks awesome!!!
Thanks! Part of her design was arrived at by way of suggestions from my LiveStream audience. ^__^
Hello, I’m Mr. E and I love reading this webcomic. However I have found out some insightful, if not disturbing, possible spoiling, horrifying, shocking theories or truths about the Draconia Chronicles. If you are curious, start at page 001 and work your way to the latest comic, I will provide some info that will make Sherlock Holmes and/or Naomi Kimishima from the Trauma Center series jaws drop in awe. I will continue to post theories and or insights throughout the pages if that’s ok with RazorFox here. (and I can make witty reparte also) BUT I must warn you, these theories are not only shocking but disturbing and can possibly unnerve you. Ready? Then go to 001 and I’ll try to investigate this twisted tale of sin, tragedy, tyranny, and manipulation.
I love reading my readers’ analyses of the comic. Please share! ^__^
… I really gotta say this-
You treat your fans awesomely. Heads, tails and wings above alot of other artists that put this much work into their projects. :3
Aw, shucks. I just love seeing you all have as much fun reading the comic as I have making it for you. I wouldn’t put it out there if I didn’t want you all to partake in it. Thanks for the kind words! =^_^=
Thank you Razor! ^^
Doctor Lucis looks awesome!!!
Thanks! Part of her design was arrived at by way of suggestions from my LiveStream audience. ^__^
This feels SO much like Paycheck right now. I wonder what the princess’ 20 items were…
Her missing My Little Dracony doll, Velvet Sun, might be on that list. ^__^
This feels SO much like Paycheck right now. I wonder what the princess’ 20 items were…
Her missing My Little Dracony doll, Velvet Sun, might be on that list. ^__^
This feels SO much like Paycheck right now. I wonder what the princess’ 20 items were…
Her missing My Little Dracony doll, Velvet Sun, might be on that list. ^__^
Hello, I’m Mr. E and I love reading this webcomic. However I have found out some insightful, if not disturbing, possible spoiling, horrifying, shocking theories or truths about the Draconia Chronicles. If you are curious, start at page 001 and work your way to the latest comic, I will provide some info that will make Sherlock Holmes and/or Naomi Kimishima from the Trauma Center series jaws drop in awe. I will continue to post theories and or insights throughout the pages if that’s ok with RazorFox here. (and I can make witty reparte also) BUT I must warn you, these theories are not only shocking but disturbing and can possibly unnerve you. Ready? Then go to 001 and I’ll try to investigate this twisted tale of sin, tragedy, tyranny, and manipulation.
I love reading my readers’ analyses of the comic. Please share! ^__^
… I really gotta say this-
You treat your fans awesomely. Heads, tails and wings above alot of other artists that put this much work into their projects. :3
Aw, shucks. I just love seeing you all have as much fun reading the comic as I have making it for you. I wouldn’t put it out there if I didn’t want you all to partake in it. Thanks for the kind words! =^_^=
Thank you Razor! ^^
Hello, I’m Mr. E and I love reading this webcomic. However I have found out some insightful, if not disturbing, possible spoiling, horrifying, shocking theories or truths about the Draconia Chronicles. If you are curious, start at page 001 and work your way to the latest comic, I will provide some info that will make Sherlock Holmes and/or Naomi Kimishima from the Trauma Center series jaws drop in awe. I will continue to post theories and or insights throughout the pages if that’s ok with RazorFox here. (and I can make witty reparte also) BUT I must warn you, these theories are not only shocking but disturbing and can possibly unnerve you. Ready? Then go to 001 and I’ll try to investigate this twisted tale of sin, tragedy, tyranny, and manipulation.
I love reading my readers’ analyses of the comic. Please share! ^__^
… I really gotta say this-
You treat your fans awesomely. Heads, tails and wings above alot of other artists that put this much work into their projects. :3
Aw, shucks. I just love seeing you all have as much fun reading the comic as I have making it for you. I wouldn’t put it out there if I didn’t want you all to partake in it. Thanks for the kind words! =^_^=
Thank you Razor! ^^
Seriously, of all the potential hazards with messing with a person’s mind she’s worried about toilet training?!!! Never mind the fact that she could end up a vegetable or have her mind snap completely turning her into a berserker. Besides you can’t trust Doctors to know everything and how it will turn out. Mistakes are always made.
I have a sick feeling you could be right about the berserker theory, Lumina could turn into another Tetsuo Shima! THAT would be bad!
“KANEEEEEDAAAAAA!”
You mean, “KIIILAAANIIIII!”
I think I did some accidental foreshadowing there…
She’s in the hands of a seasoned professional. Things should turn out fine… right?
“… Right?”
Always a kicker.
Seriously, of all the potential hazards with messing with a person’s mind she’s worried about toilet training?!!! Never mind the fact that she could end up a vegetable or have her mind snap completely turning her into a berserker. Besides you can’t trust Doctors to know everything and how it will turn out. Mistakes are always made.
I have a sick feeling you could be right about the berserker theory, Lumina could turn into another Tetsuo Shima! THAT would be bad!
“KANEEEEEDAAAAAA!”
You mean, “KIIILAAANIIIII!”
I think I did some accidental foreshadowing there…
She’s in the hands of a seasoned professional. Things should turn out fine… right?
“… Right?”
Always a kicker.
Seriously, of all the potential hazards with messing with a person’s mind she’s worried about toilet training?!!! Never mind the fact that she could end up a vegetable or have her mind snap completely turning her into a berserker. Besides you can’t trust Doctors to know everything and how it will turn out. Mistakes are always made.
I have a sick feeling you could be right about the berserker theory, Lumina could turn into another Tetsuo Shima! THAT would be bad!
“KANEEEEEDAAAAAA!”
You mean, “KIIILAAANIIIII!”
I think I did some accidental foreshadowing there…
She’s in the hands of a seasoned professional. Things should turn out fine… right?
“… Right?”
Always a kicker.
Love the design of the new dragon girl (I think I havent seen her before) Her name sound funny, you based the name Lucis in Lucy + Luces? … also notice her color is a really similar one to Sombrana`s body colors, is she some kind of relative?
Ok, this will be the only time I will voice my opinion, so please people, dont eat me alive and forget my bad english but I think I have to play the roll of the devil`s lawyer. Must point out that, on the past few pages (I belive) people fall to easy for Kilani and condemn too quick Queen Oscura, hardly trying to been on her shoes so to speak. Now I must point out that I dont hate tiger or dragon, and I like both of the character of Kilane and Oscura.
But lets started thinking on the roll WE have on this comic is almost of the omnipotent being. We have access to what the characters do, want, see, think and feel and not only that but we have this panoramic view of all character and their context. That being pointed out im not saying Im justifying the bad actions of the characters, its just that for Us is easy loose the objetive view of what is happening because we can see the core of the character.
Going back to the whole point of why I think people love Kilani and Hate Oscura is because of what I just said. We know that Kilani`s intentions are good, we know she want peace between dragons and tiger and that she truly love Lumina. We also know that in some degree the intentions of Queen Oscura with Lumina`s fate as some kind of tiger destroyer weapon, but I think she have also show action of true love with Lumina, I mean, if she was just a weapon on the moment her egg was lost she could make another egg, but Queen Oscura have show that Lumina is for her irreplaceable. She have told us that she is worry of her daughter to loose her happy memories with the dragons, and hate Kilate because she didnt let enjoy her first year with her.
Now, going deeper on the matter lets try to see what the Queen see. Her child was taken away by the enemy, she wasnt able to enjoy the youth of her daughter, see her first steps, listen to her first words and many other things. Plus to this, lets see the real case, in our world some womans have experienced this, their child was taken away by other woman. If they manage to get their child back, no matter how good the other woman raise the child, they will never feel a like to the other person, because they will always will been see as the someone that stole you something precious. Also, what I think is more funny, when we see this in real life, no matter what that other person want or feel or how good she was with the child, we dont have respect for them because for what they did.
As I said before, we are in some level omnipotent viewers and we know Kilani never knew who`s egg was the one she takes. We know that she raise and love Lumina (Chucki?) but queen doesnt. Now, nobody (including me) can denie she have done bad things like what happend to Gaia, that I think she is not entire innocent (but doesnt mean she deserve her fate) but thats just my opinion and wont put it here for the momment unless you really want to know.
So in short I think people forget that we can see everythig and the character no. We judge them really quick but hardly really try to undestand the view of every single character in the comic, we just agree with the ones we want to agree.
Share you opinion if you want, I dont think people will read this whole thing, but if you does, and want to reply please be polite as I try to be with you, whatever you say it wont change my opinion, as I dont think I can change yours, but is nice to have conversations so go ahead.
tl;dr: We, the readers, can see both sides of the story. Oscura and the other characters can’t.
Absolutely excellent analysis! And you’re one hundred percent right, in that we, the audience, are omniscient observers who have the advantage of being privy to what’s happening on each side. The characters in the story don’t have that luxury, which is why I’ve been trying to make sure Queen Oscura has had a chance to summarize the story based her own perspective on things. It doesn’t mean you have to like her, but I at least want her to be understood. She wants to make sure her heir apparent does not have her sympathies tainted by fond memories for a Tiger, and as a mother, she wants to reclaim her own flesh and blood to make up for the lost years.
Again, excellent analysis, Hiorou! I’m very impressed! ^o^
Yeah, we can see everything (or at least what is reveal on the comic) and yet people really seem to forget that really easy that we dont involve with that world and that the character lack of our view.
Plus I think other usually mistake that many does is the idea of “if you try to see through the character eyes and understanding their feellings, it mean that you accept his/her idea and actions”
Trying to undestasnt a character doesnt mean you have to like her or him or that you justified his/her actions. I think that placing yourself on the character situation can actually help you to give a more deep, objetive and critical analisys of she/he feel.
At the end, deep character actually are not black or white, but made of grey, some actions are good (Queens love for her daughter) while other are bad (her relationship with the earth dragons) But people usually made the mistake to just focus one the bad/good actions. I like how the Queen have progress slowly to show her more soft spott on things. I just I wish people were a little less pre judicious about the character, that include the one that have been the bad ones but the good ones too (saying that I must addmit that I will love to see a more darker form of Kilani)
Be careful what you wish for… ~__^
It may come truuUUuUUUUUuuuEEEeeeEEEeeeEEeeee!
My responses are, I don’t know, I agree but Oscura’s personality stinks right now, of course, unfortunately there’s less parenting and more weaponizing, oh IT’S REAL, of course Kilani didn’t know the egg was Oscura’s, and all of you including me knew that BUT Oscuran didn’t know that, and we all agree she’s not a saint like sending Gaia to her death (even though she wasn’t all innocent) but that’s because she’s doing what she thinks is heroic, but it’s evil. Lastly, we shouldn’t judge the characters too quick, we should really try to understand every characters’ POVs’. That is my reply, thank you.
Love the design of the new dragon girl (I think I havent seen her before) Her name sound funny, you based the name Lucis in Lucy + Luces? … also notice her color is a really similar one to Sombrana`s body colors, is she some kind of relative?
Ok, this will be the only time I will voice my opinion, so please people, dont eat me alive and forget my bad english but I think I have to play the roll of the devil`s lawyer. Must point out that, on the past few pages (I belive) people fall to easy for Kilani and condemn too quick Queen Oscura, hardly trying to been on her shoes so to speak. Now I must point out that I dont hate tiger or dragon, and I like both of the character of Kilane and Oscura.
But lets started thinking on the roll WE have on this comic is almost of the omnipotent being. We have access to what the characters do, want, see, think and feel and not only that but we have this panoramic view of all character and their context. That being pointed out im not saying Im justifying the bad actions of the characters, its just that for Us is easy loose the objetive view of what is happening because we can see the core of the character.
Going back to the whole point of why I think people love Kilani and Hate Oscura is because of what I just said. We know that Kilani`s intentions are good, we know she want peace between dragons and tiger and that she truly love Lumina. We also know that in some degree the intentions of Queen Oscura with Lumina`s fate as some kind of tiger destroyer weapon, but I think she have also show action of true love with Lumina, I mean, if she was just a weapon on the moment her egg was lost she could make another egg, but Queen Oscura have show that Lumina is for her irreplaceable. She have told us that she is worry of her daughter to loose her happy memories with the dragons, and hate Kilate because she didnt let enjoy her first year with her.
Now, going deeper on the matter lets try to see what the Queen see. Her child was taken away by the enemy, she wasnt able to enjoy the youth of her daughter, see her first steps, listen to her first words and many other things. Plus to this, lets see the real case, in our world some womans have experienced this, their child was taken away by other woman. If they manage to get their child back, no matter how good the other woman raise the child, they will never feel a like to the other person, because they will always will been see as the someone that stole you something precious. Also, what I think is more funny, when we see this in real life, no matter what that other person want or feel or how good she was with the child, we dont have respect for them because for what they did.
As I said before, we are in some level omnipotent viewers and we know Kilani never knew who`s egg was the one she takes. We know that she raise and love Lumina (Chucki?) but queen doesnt. Now, nobody (including me) can denie she have done bad things like what happend to Gaia, that I think she is not entire innocent (but doesnt mean she deserve her fate) but thats just my opinion and wont put it here for the momment unless you really want to know.
So in short I think people forget that we can see everythig and the character no. We judge them really quick but hardly really try to undestand the view of every single character in the comic, we just agree with the ones we want to agree.
Share you opinion if you want, I dont think people will read this whole thing, but if you does, and want to reply please be polite as I try to be with you, whatever you say it wont change my opinion, as I dont think I can change yours, but is nice to have conversations so go ahead.
tl;dr: We, the readers, can see both sides of the story. Oscura and the other characters can’t.
Absolutely excellent analysis! And you’re one hundred percent right, in that we, the audience, are omniscient observers who have the advantage of being privy to what’s happening on each side. The characters in the story don’t have that luxury, which is why I’ve been trying to make sure Queen Oscura has had a chance to summarize the story based her own perspective on things. It doesn’t mean you have to like her, but I at least want her to be understood. She wants to make sure her heir apparent does not have her sympathies tainted by fond memories for a Tiger, and as a mother, she wants to reclaim her own flesh and blood to make up for the lost years.
Again, excellent analysis, Hiorou! I’m very impressed! ^o^
Yeah, we can see everything (or at least what is reveal on the comic) and yet people really seem to forget that really easy that we dont involve with that world and that the character lack of our view.
Plus I think other usually mistake that many does is the idea of “if you try to see through the character eyes and understanding their feellings, it mean that you accept his/her idea and actions”
Trying to undestasnt a character doesnt mean you have to like her or him or that you justified his/her actions. I think that placing yourself on the character situation can actually help you to give a more deep, objetive and critical analisys of she/he feel.
At the end, deep character actually are not black or white, but made of grey, some actions are good (Queens love for her daughter) while other are bad (her relationship with the earth dragons) But people usually made the mistake to just focus one the bad/good actions. I like how the Queen have progress slowly to show her more soft spott on things. I just I wish people were a little less pre judicious about the character, that include the one that have been the bad ones but the good ones too (saying that I must addmit that I will love to see a more darker form of Kilani)
Be careful what you wish for… ~__^
It may come truuUUuUUUUUuuuEEEeeeEEEeeeEEeeee!
My responses are, I don’t know, I agree but Oscura’s personality stinks right now, of course, unfortunately there’s less parenting and more weaponizing, oh IT’S REAL, of course Kilani didn’t know the egg was Oscura’s, and all of you including me knew that BUT Oscuran didn’t know that, and we all agree she’s not a saint like sending Gaia to her death (even though she wasn’t all innocent) but that’s because she’s doing what she thinks is heroic, but it’s evil. Lastly, we shouldn’t judge the characters too quick, we should really try to understand every characters’ POVs’. That is my reply, thank you.
Good queen. Pragmatic queen.
Gotta protect all those heirlooms from being soiled. ^__^
Good queen. Pragmatic queen.
Gotta protect all those heirlooms from being soiled. ^__^
Good queen. Pragmatic queen.
Gotta protect all those heirlooms from being soiled. ^__^
Of this I am certain, in fact one can tell that the cleaning was not as thorough as she imagined heh. I know that there is a surviving scrap in there! So sayeth the scroll-writer~
Well, Queen Oscura and Lady Chiara have each witnessed that. It’s time to purify.
Of this I am certain, in fact one can tell that the cleaning was not as thorough as she imagined heh. I know that there is a surviving scrap in there! So sayeth the scroll-writer~
Well, Queen Oscura and Lady Chiara have each witnessed that. It’s time to purify.
Of this I am certain, in fact one can tell that the cleaning was not as thorough as she imagined heh. I know that there is a surviving scrap in there! So sayeth the scroll-writer~
Well, Queen Oscura and Lady Chiara have each witnessed that. It’s time to purify.
I have a feeling purging her memories is not going to be that easy, I mean from what I’m getting, they’ve tried it once and somehow she created new memories, even if more percise this time, there may be a part of Lumina that doesn’t want to forget, and I wouldn’t be surprised if the moment they attempt this, sedated or not, that part will start fighting back.
We shall see how things turn out, and what survives…
It is really scary world, where someone can wipe selectively memory of someone else.
We are much more civilised. We often using indoctrination, propaganda, sophisticated lies, persuasion, psychological violence … more civilised methods. Or not?
There may be some parallels, but none of those actually make changes directly to your brain while you’re unconscious.
I have a feeling purging her memories is not going to be that easy, I mean from what I’m getting, they’ve tried it once and somehow she created new memories, even if more percise this time, there may be a part of Lumina that doesn’t want to forget, and I wouldn’t be surprised if the moment they attempt this, sedated or not, that part will start fighting back.
We shall see how things turn out, and what survives…
I have a feeling purging her memories is not going to be that easy, I mean from what I’m getting, they’ve tried it once and somehow she created new memories, even if more percise this time, there may be a part of Lumina that doesn’t want to forget, and I wouldn’t be surprised if the moment they attempt this, sedated or not, that part will start fighting back.
We shall see how things turn out, and what survives…
Wiping memories of Kilani, check. Keeping all of the fond memories that the two of them have shared together intact, check. Making sure that she remembers her toilet training, Priceless.
I’m sure glad that she’s got her priorities straightened out.
Can’t have a six-year-old running around in a diaper. She is a princess, after all. ^__^
True. And at the very least they can have an excuse as to why her memory isn’t all that much in tact by explaining that she must have hit her head during that whole volcano incident.
The big question is however…is the queen going to return Velvet Sun and make her daughter forget that she ever lost it?
I dunno. That’s bordering on “miracle” territory, now. ^o^
Wiping memories of Kilani, check. Keeping all of the fond memories that the two of them have shared together intact, check. Making sure that she remembers her toilet training, Priceless.
I’m sure glad that she’s got her priorities straightened out.
Can’t have a six-year-old running around in a diaper. She is a princess, after all. ^__^
True. And at the very least they can have an excuse as to why her memory isn’t all that much in tact by explaining that she must have hit her head during that whole volcano incident.
The big question is however…is the queen going to return Velvet Sun and make her daughter forget that she ever lost it?
I dunno. That’s bordering on “miracle” territory, now. ^o^
It is really scary world, where someone can wipe selectively memory of someone else.
We are much more civilised. We often using indoctrination, propaganda, sophisticated lies, persuasion, psychological violence … more civilised methods. Or not?
There may be some parallels, but none of those actually make changes directly to your brain while you’re unconscious.
It is really scary world, where someone can wipe selectively memory of someone else.
We are much more civilised. We often using indoctrination, propaganda, sophisticated lies, persuasion, psychological violence … more civilised methods. Or not?
There may be some parallels, but none of those actually make changes directly to your brain while you’re unconscious.
I apologize, but my inner grammar Nazi compels me to point this out.
On panel 4, “intact” is supposed to be one word. Not “in tact.”
Intact – Not altered, broken, or impaired; remaining uninjured, sound, or whole; untouched; unblemished.
Tact – A keen sense of what to say or do to avoid giving offense; skill in dealing with difficult or delicate situations.
Turns out you’re right. Thanks for pointing this out.
I’d honestly thought it was “in tact” [sic], and that “intact” was an incorrect compounding of the two words. The corresponding example of this is with the term “set up.” “Set up,” as two words, is a verb. “Setup,” as one word, is a noun. Despite this, most people just use “setup” for all instances of the term. I thought maybe the same bastardized compounding of “in tact” had occurred, but then I looked it up and realized that it’s always been “intact.” Huh. Learn something everyday. I love my readers! ^__^
Suffice to say, I’ve just corrected that word balloon and reuploaded the file. Thank you, mein grammarführer! ^__^
“Springtime for Hitler, and Germaneeee! Deutschland, is having, a baaaaallllllllllllll!”
I apologize, but my inner grammar Nazi compels me to point this out.
On panel 4, “intact” is supposed to be one word. Not “in tact.”
Intact – Not altered, broken, or impaired; remaining uninjured, sound, or whole; untouched; unblemished.
Tact – A keen sense of what to say or do to avoid giving offense; skill in dealing with difficult or delicate situations.
Turns out you’re right. Thanks for pointing this out.
I’d honestly thought it was “in tact” [sic], and that “intact” was an incorrect compounding of the two words. The corresponding example of this is with the term “set up.” “Set up,” as two words, is a verb. “Setup,” as one word, is a noun. Despite this, most people just use “setup” for all instances of the term. I thought maybe the same bastardized compounding of “in tact” had occurred, but then I looked it up and realized that it’s always been “intact.” Huh. Learn something everyday. I love my readers! ^__^
Suffice to say, I’ve just corrected that word balloon and reuploaded the file. Thank you, mein grammarführer! ^__^
“Springtime for Hitler, and Germaneeee! Deutschland, is having, a baaaaallllllllllllll!”
Royal beotch.
Shot…late as always with all the observations already taken. However, I do have one noted observation. If they have the ability to “manipulate” the mind, couldn’t the queen do this to the earth dragons to get rid of that whole “blackmail” problem?
It might be harder to do. You’ll see why down the road.
She prefers the term Her Royal Bizznatch.
Royal beotch.
She prefers the term Her Royal Bizznatch.
Royal beotch.
She prefers the term Her Royal Bizznatch.
I have a question (can not remember if someone already asked this before): How Kilani stole the egg without knowing that he was of the queen Oscura?
Her memories will survive at least in part how can the person who took care of her for years not remain as such?
Not when it can be excused as a matter of national security.
national security my *** if those memories are being targeted then well lets put it this way the even best sniper needs a scope to hit his/her target Kilini’s true intent would be discovered in the proses of removing those memories.
This is addressed in the early pages of chapter three, starting on page 225. Kess drags the information out of Kilani.
Oh sorry >.<
-_-;
I have a question (can not remember if someone already asked this before): How Kilani stole the egg without knowing that he was of the queen Oscura?
This is addressed in the early pages of chapter three, starting on page 225. Kess drags the information out of Kilani.
Oh sorry >.<
-_-;
I have a question (can not remember if someone already asked this before): How Kilani stole the egg without knowing that he was of the queen Oscura?
This is addressed in the early pages of chapter three, starting on page 225. Kess drags the information out of Kilani.
Oh sorry >.<
-_-;
they better see how nice Kilani was
They might, one day. Wishful thinking, I know.
Long time no see razor, i gotta say you continue to impress! But i must ask, is the ‘Doctor’ a new dragon variation that just peaked? or has her kind appeared in previous pages and i blindly missed this fact?
She’s a Light Dragon, a race whose Dragons typically have skin colors ranging from blue to green. Aside from Queen Oscura, Princess Lumina, and Sombrana, all my other Light Dragons thus far have been blue. I figured a green one was due. ^__^
UN-fortunately, THAT could turn Oscura into an emo full of guilt, regret, and suicidal tendancies. 🙁
Reply please! ^
What… do I reply to? There’s no question.
The one saying UN-fortunately, THAT could turn Oscura into etc. etc. etc. RazorFox. I tried to make an arrow pointing to the comment, but I couldn’t do it. Hope this helps! 😉
Also Razor, I added a possible side effects comment that you REALLLY should read and reply! Please?
Yeesh, hold your horses. I have a life here, and it’s Thanksgiving, to boot. Plus, responding in any detail to that comment would create the possibility of a spoiler… or WOULD it?
But otherwise, while I do try to reply to each comment at least once, I don’t always respond to every subsequent comment in that particular thread. I figure that I’ve said my piece and if I feel a need to add anything else, I will. Anything else that amounts to the speculation you’ve posted will be addressed in the natural unfolding of events within the comic. You’re welcome to try to predict the future all you want, or ask hypothetical, rhetorical “what if” questions, but in the name of protecting future story developments, I reserve my right to remain silent.
Happy Thanksgiving, though! ^__^
Oh, sorry, I understand but you should at least please try to read my comments on this page, they’re pretty observant and imaginative! (why is that line “or WOULD it?” proving to be a real tingler?)
Oh, and Happy Thanksgiving to you too Razor!
I’ve read every single one, from you and everyone else. You’re not the only Draconiac here, but I certainly appreciate your enthusiasm. ^__^
Thanks! ^u^
they better see how nice Kilani was
They might, one day. Wishful thinking, I know.
UN-fortunately, THAT could turn Oscura into an emo full of guilt, regret, and suicidal tendancies. 🙁
Reply please! ^
What… do I reply to? There’s no question.
The one saying UN-fortunately, THAT could turn Oscura into etc. etc. etc. RazorFox. I tried to make an arrow pointing to the comment, but I couldn’t do it. Hope this helps! 😉
Also Razor, I added a possible side effects comment that you REALLLY should read and reply! Please?
Yeesh, hold your horses. I have a life here, and it’s Thanksgiving, to boot. Plus, responding in any detail to that comment would create the possibility of a spoiler… or WOULD it?
But otherwise, while I do try to reply to each comment at least once, I don’t always respond to every subsequent comment in that particular thread. I figure that I’ve said my piece and if I feel a need to add anything else, I will. Anything else that amounts to the speculation you’ve posted will be addressed in the natural unfolding of events within the comic. You’re welcome to try to predict the future all you want, or ask hypothetical, rhetorical “what if” questions, but in the name of protecting future story developments, I reserve my right to remain silent.
Happy Thanksgiving, though! ^__^
Oh, sorry, I understand but you should at least please try to read my comments on this page, they’re pretty observant and imaginative! (why is that line “or WOULD it?” proving to be a real tingler?)
Oh, and Happy Thanksgiving to you too Razor!
I’ve read every single one, from you and everyone else. You’re not the only Draconiac here, but I certainly appreciate your enthusiasm. ^__^
Thanks! ^u^
I understand the importance of having a six-year old princess toilet trained, but I would be more worried about the lessons that she’s learned. I honestly wouldn’t want to re-teach six years of ANYTHING.
Agreed. Hence, the more selectively targeted cleansing this time around. Toilet training is just the tip of the iceberg.
Sorry. Six MONTHS.
I understand the importance of having a six-year old princess toilet trained, but I would be more worried about the lessons that she’s learned. I honestly wouldn’t want to re-teach six years of ANYTHING.
Agreed. Hence, the more selectively targeted cleansing this time around. Toilet training is just the tip of the iceberg.
Sorry. Six MONTHS.
Shot…late as always with all the observations already taken. However, I do have one noted observation. If they have the ability to “manipulate” the mind, couldn’t the queen do this to the earth dragons to get rid of that whole “blackmail” problem?
It might be harder to do. You’ll see why down the road.
Her memories will survive at least in part how can the person who took care of her for years not remain as such?
Not when it can be excused as a matter of national security.
national security my *** if those memories are being targeted then well lets put it this way the even best sniper needs a scope to hit his/her target Kilini’s true intent would be discovered in the proses of removing those memories.
Another thing…Should I, in the slightest amount, be disturbed by the fact that the doctor has ample experience in selectively erasing people’s minds?
Mmmmmmaybe.
As long as they don’t erase the potty training knowledge…
HA who knew the queen was a comedian
“Laugh, or be exiled!”
HahahahahaXD
“Excellent. No exile for you!”
“I’m not laughing Oscura and you can’t exile me without a fight! Why? Not only I have powers (hands flare with a strong unknown energy.) or knowledge of the sword, (unsheathes a brilliant sturdy sword with a golden blade.) It’s because I have friends from another world! (a HUMONGUS horde of various types of Pokemon suddenly appear.) Something YOU will never have with THAT AT-TIT-TUDE. I don’t want to hurt you and you don’t want to hurt me. So how about it? Leave this farce alone, or we battle? What do you say? Am I right RazorFox?”
Eh, let’s let the Queen tell another joke or two. You can’t just bust out your biggest joke right out of the gate. Where do you go from there? Every comedian has to start their routine small and build up from there. I’m sure the Palace has an amateur night. ^__^
Ok, but that wasn’t joke by the way.
But mine was. ^o^
Ok, but I wonder what that &!#@# of a queen’s reaction was.
Don’t forget IM-planting stuff into people’s minds too!
I got three insight ful comments on pages 214, 215, and 216.
WARNING THEY MIGHT CONTAIN SPOILERS!!!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!
And please reply to my comments, I would be most appreciative and appreciated.
I would be.
Another thing…Should I, in the slightest amount, be disturbed by the fact that the doctor has ample experience in selectively erasing people’s minds?
Mmmmmmaybe.
As long as they don’t erase the potty training knowledge…
Don’t forget IM-planting stuff into people’s minds too!
I would be.
Another thing…Should I, in the slightest amount, be disturbed by the fact that the doctor has ample experience in selectively erasing people’s minds?
Mmmmmmaybe.
As long as they don’t erase the potty training knowledge…
Don’t forget IM-planting stuff into people’s minds too!
I would be.
HA who knew the queen was a comedian
“Laugh, or be exiled!”
HahahahahaXD
“Excellent. No exile for you!”
“I’m not laughing Oscura and you can’t exile me without a fight! Why? Not only I have powers (hands flare with a strong unknown energy.) or knowledge of the sword, (unsheathes a brilliant sturdy sword with a golden blade.) It’s because I have friends from another world! (a HUMONGUS horde of various types of Pokemon suddenly appear.) Something YOU will never have with THAT AT-TIT-TUDE. I don’t want to hurt you and you don’t want to hurt me. So how about it? Leave this farce alone, or we battle? What do you say? Am I right RazorFox?”
Eh, let’s let the Queen tell another joke or two. You can’t just bust out your biggest joke right out of the gate. Where do you go from there? Every comedian has to start their routine small and build up from there. I’m sure the Palace has an amateur night. ^__^
Ok, but that wasn’t joke by the way.
But mine was. ^o^
Ok, but I wonder what that &!#@# of a queen’s reaction was.
Hah, the Queen cracked a funny!
I’m quite interested in how this mind wipe will work. Also does this sort of thing increase in difficulty in older dragons? Either or, I can’t possibly see how this can go wrong.
(Botch it, botch it, c’mon man, botch it. Not hatin’, just think it would benefit the future generations is all. Even if by a little, please botch it!)
Doctor Lucis says she’s good at what she does. But then again, even the best sports team lose a game every now and then. We’ll see how it turns out.
I don’t think you should wish that, why? Read my side effects comment! ||
/
Hah, the Queen cracked a funny!
I’m quite interested in how this mind wipe will work. Also does this sort of thing increase in difficulty in older dragons? Either or, I can’t possibly see how this can go wrong.
(Botch it, botch it, c’mon man, botch it. Not hatin’, just think it would benefit the future generations is all. Even if by a little, please botch it!)
Doctor Lucis says she’s good at what she does. But then again, even the best sports team lose a game every now and then. We’ll see how it turns out.
I don’t think you should wish that, why? Read my side effects comment! ||
/
Long time no see razor, i gotta say you continue to impress! But i must ask, is the ‘Doctor’ a new dragon variation that just peaked? or has her kind appeared in previous pages and i blindly missed this fact?
She’s a Light Dragon, a race whose Dragons typically have skin colors ranging from blue to green. Aside from Queen Oscura, Princess Lumina, and Sombrana, all my other Light Dragons thus far have been blue. I figured a green one was due. ^__^
HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!! HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!!
HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!! HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!!
(sorry for the Navi reference there.) ^w^”
now that I have your attention. My Ch. 1 comments are complete! If you all want to read Ch. 1 again go ahead!
And I have commented on this page too so be sure to read my comments and reply please! That means you RazorFox! (if you want to.). =|)
except for page 29. you forgot to comment on that one.
Fixed it! And you and your friends can reply on my comments throughout chapter 1!
P.S. were my comments insightful,funny, and emotional?)
you gonna do ch.2 soon?
Yes, but it’s not gonna be on every page. It’s HARD! 8(
you gonna do ch.2 soon?
Long time no see razor, i gotta say you continue to impress! But i must ask, is the ‘Doctor’ a new dragon variation that just peaked? or has her kind appeared in previous pages and i blindly missed this fact?
She’s a Light Dragon, a race whose Dragons typically have skin colors ranging from blue to green. Aside from Queen Oscura, Princess Lumina, and Sombrana, all my other Light Dragons thus far have been blue. I figured a green one was due. ^__^
always knew there was a little hope for the obscured queen (hey i’ve been funny all my life, how old is the comic, huh?). she’s not really evil, just really messed up and inside her own little bubble. she is unable to treat others as she wishes to be treated, and if she keeps doing this to her daughter jsut to keep her indiscriminate rule (which has already begun cracking at the edges), these thigns will be her undoing, sooner or later. she will sadly be like vader: only at death by the hanbds of others can she both realize and accept a life of wrongdoings
Unfortunate, that is.
Well, she and Vader both have the same taste in color schemes. Black goes with everything, after all. ^__^
So true.
always knew there was a little hope for the obscured queen (hey i’ve been funny all my life, how old is the comic, huh?). she’s not really evil, just really messed up and inside her own little bubble. she is unable to treat others as she wishes to be treated, and if she keeps doing this to her daughter jsut to keep her indiscriminate rule (which has already begun cracking at the edges), these thigns will be her undoing, sooner or later. she will sadly be like vader: only at death by the hanbds of others can she both realize and accept a life of wrongdoings
Unfortunate, that is.
Well, she and Vader both have the same taste in color schemes. Black goes with everything, after all. ^__^
So true.
always knew there was a little hope for the obscured queen (hey i’ve been funny all my life, how old is the comic, huh?). she’s not really evil, just really messed up and inside her own little bubble. she is unable to treat others as she wishes to be treated, and if she keeps doing this to her daughter jsut to keep her indiscriminate rule (which has already begun cracking at the edges), these thigns will be her undoing, sooner or later. she will sadly be like vader: only at death by the hanbds of others can she both realize and accept a life of wrongdoings
Unfortunate, that is.
Well, she and Vader both have the same taste in color schemes. Black goes with everything, after all. ^__^
So true.
Wait, a light dragon? (Thought it was water)
Yup. All the Dragons in this scene, in fact, are Light Dragons.
What? No darkness dragons? ;P
I think there could be… X(
Wait, a light dragon? (Thought it was water)
Yup. All the Dragons in this scene, in fact, are Light Dragons.
What? No darkness dragons? ;P
I think there could be… X(
Wait, a light dragon? (Thought it was water)
Yup. All the Dragons in this scene, in fact, are Light Dragons.
What? No darkness dragons? ;P
I think there could be… X(
What i just thought of somthing what does chuki father think of all this,Kilanni takeing care of chuki,the mind wipe and Oscura leadership?
Good question. I might have to ask him. ~__^
He means Ghislain!
I know. Glad you remember his name. ^__^
Yep, I sure do!
What i just thought of somthing what does chuki father think of all this,Kilanni takeing care of chuki,the mind wipe and Oscura leadership?
Good question. I might have to ask him. ~__^
He means Ghislain!
I know. Glad you remember his name. ^__^
Yep, I sure do!
HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!! HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!!
HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!! HEY!! LISTEN!!! HEY!! HEY!! LISTEN, LISTEN!!!!!!
(sorry for the Navi reference there.) ^w^”
now that I have your attention. My Ch. 1 comments are complete! If you all want to read Ch. 1 again go ahead!
And I have commented on this page too so be sure to read my comments and reply please! That means you RazorFox! (if you want to.). =|)
except for page 29. you forgot to comment on that one.
Fixed it! And you and your friends can reply on my comments throughout chapter 1!
P.S. were my comments insightful,funny, and emotional?)
you gonna do ch.2 soon?
Yes, but it’s not gonna be on every page. It’s HARD! 8(
you gonna do ch.2 soon?
Fi: master there is 89% chance of a screw up happening that will endanger the girl and expose everything
me:………..
Fi:master?
Fi: master I have found that there is an 11% chance that the process will not only give her great powers, but also will twist the girl’s mind and corrupt her body and soul, I recommend going against the process if you want the girl to be the daughter you love.
Fi: master there is 89% chance of a screw up happening that will endanger the girl and expose everything
me:………..
Fi:master?
Fi: master I have found that there is an 11% chance that the process will not only give her great powers, but also will twist the girl’s mind and corrupt her body and soul, I recommend going against the process if you want the girl to be the daughter you love.
Fi: master there is 89% chance of a screw up happening that will endanger the girl and expose everything
me:………..
Fi:master?
Fi: master I have found that there is an 11% chance that the process will not only give her great powers, but also will twist the girl’s mind and corrupt her body and soul, I recommend going against the process if you want the girl to be the daughter you love.
Anyone have or had a girlfriend that is or was kind for half of the time? That who the queen reminds me of (no offence)
Anyone have or had a girlfriend that is or was kind for half of the time? That who the queen reminds me of (no offence)
Anyone have or had a girlfriend that is or was kind for half of the time? That who the queen reminds me of (no offence)
Odd thing is that You’d think Kilanni would have taught her toilet training already.
Well, they did live away from civilization for quite some time…
Odd thing is that You’d think Kilanni would have taught her toilet training already.
Well, they did live away from civilization for quite some time…
Odd thing is that You’d think Kilanni would have taught her toilet training already.
Well, they did live away from civilization for quite some time…
I got three insight ful comments on pages 214, 215, and 216.
WARNING THEY MIGHT CONTAIN SPOILERS!!!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!
And please reply to my comments, I would be most appreciative and appreciated.
I got three insight ful comments on pages 214, 215, and 216.
WARNING THEY MIGHT CONTAIN SPOILERS!!!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!
And please reply to my comments, I would be most appreciative and appreciated.
Lock the castle first. So no one comes in, or out, to interrupt.
Lock the castle first. So no one comes in, or out, to interrupt.
Lock the castle first. So no one comes in, or out, to interrupt.
I woud call this Revaneg time i waite so long for this 😀
and finaly here
good work hoping to see more 😀
I woud call this Revaneg time i waite so long for this 😀
and finaly here
good work hoping to see more 😀
I woud call this Revaneg time i waite so long for this 😀
and finaly here
good work hoping to see more 😀
You dastardly scaly fiends…